Dream Deep

o.0 Haha, but I read this before, on Messenger. On a note purely on topic... I have to say I think you've been listening to too much Mein Tiel . ...

9/10 Till : ... if I say any more, I'll never live it down. xD You should see this wallpaper I found? Hah, yes, I've got no life... ended up ...

9/10 Till : That does seem to be the consensus among 'the YWS women' as Pros calls them... o.0 ^_~

Cal : Your pretzel logic may be reassuring? ^~ Ah well... with any luck I'll have more for you to crit in not too long a time. Kay : Feel ...

This was, ah... not my type of poetry either. That's like reading really graphic Rammstein lyrics, without having to bother with translation. ... This, Till? This almost makes Rein Raus ...

*hugs* Thanks so much, Till. ^_^ Your opinion means a lot, especially on this. I'm just flattered that you took the time to go through it and write everything in. ...

Camille by Alexander Dumas [ fils ] Courtesy of Till. ;)

9/10 ^_^

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Paint It Black by Janet Fitch

Much thanks for the extended commentary and crit, Shireling. Ah, yes, it is a good bit tidier and cleaner now that I've had such an amount of time to work ...

:razz: Vas is das? A new reader? Someone... I didn't hold at gunpoint to get here? Someone... not the Imp? Or Snoink, Crysi or Kay? Someone... new ? Thank you, ...

Ach, before you do anything, SassyLady, you need some spacing in there. As you have it, it's nearly a solid block of text. Space out each paragraph and new bit ...

This is very unique, Jack, very unusual. That being said, I like it very much. Glad you mentioned it in the chat, otherwise I don't know that I would have ...

Dreamy sits with an hand against Imp's shoulder (mainly out of camaraderie and the need to keep the bleary Imp from slouching off her barstool again), sipping at her Pepsi. ...